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gauri_agr

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Hi All,

Today I am starting my blog. Please edit a few sentences about me which I want to use on my blog

I am a enthusiatic person and love to do every thing with my best efforts. Currently, brining up two children and one husband for past ten years. Life has shown me various colors and a few ones are still on the way. As of now I write on life experince and parenting. Life will change the colors to me, I will change the topics of my writing :)

Thanks a lot..!!
Gauri
 

billmcd

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Hi All,

Today I am starting my blog. Please edit a few sentences about me which I want to use on my blog

I am [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] an enthusiatic person and love to do [STRIKE]every thing [/STRIKE] everything with my best efforts. Currently, I am bringing up two children and one husband for the past ten years. Life has shown me various colors (?) and a few [STRIKE]ones[/STRIKE] are still on the way. As of now I write on life experince and parenting. Life will change the colors [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] for me, and I will change the topics of my writing :)

Thanks a lot..!!
Gauri

And certainly "bringing up one husband" is your biggest challenge! :-? But seriously, I would use maybe "caring for" for your husband.
 

gauri_agr

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thanks you so much :)
 
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