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"This hotel report assignment is rather an interesting assignment and Rising Dragon Palace Hotel is really an exciting choice with us. After entering the hotel to find (or: gather) information about it, we find that the hotel has many interesting things. It is a hotel that is a selection correct (or: suitable) for everybody. Due to this assignment, we have understood more about the hotel also services industry in Vietnam now. We write about its name, location, history, number of rooms, kinds of rooms, organizational chart, services and facilities and so on. Rising Dragon Palace Hotel
bringsmakes sure that tourists feel satisfied and comfortable for touristsby modern services, stylish ambience, professional servicestaff and especially, Rising Dragon Palace Hotel is the newest of 6 Rising Dragon Palace Hotel systems. Rising Dragon Palace Hotel is one of the good 2-star sor 3-star shotel systems at Quarter Old now. Rising Dragon Palace Hotel is an attraction places for tourism actionis a tourist attraction and a place for many activities.
After completing this assignment,
we are really knownwe know exactly that Rising Dragon Palace Hotel will bring new impressions about systems hotel in Hanoi. Having many problems is concentrated by us.We have been confronted with many problems. MaybeThe fact is that doing such an assignment is really a difficult thing with us because we have to overcome many challenges. For example, we have to spend much time on finding information about this hotel. After finding about hotel to know about places and kind of hotel,After finding all the necessary information we have to go to the hotel (pl. hotels - I thought you have to go to six hotels?) together to make an on-site inspection. There are many hotels but we don’twhich do not allow us to enter the hotelso we must go to many other places. Due to our skills and good communication ofin the group (pl. groups – six groups or only one group?); we can find “Rising Dragon Palace Hotel”. Moreover, members of the groups lives far withfrom each other, and transportation is very difficult and disadvantageous, so we areit is very difficult to meet. We find that we should choice a hotel that provides wonderfulexcellent and goodservices hotelto create a good impression to somebody. The information about the hotel inon the internet is very muchconsiderable. However, we have to go there to meet receptionists or hotel management to have information about the hotel. We must also take photographs with receptionists or hotel management. Then, we write an assignment with suitable contents.
We get a study group together and each person contributes
usexpertise into the part of this assignment. We make a great effort to complete it because all ofmembers of our group are always hard-working. Nevertheless, the hotel report assignment is very useful to many students like us. It not only supply information but also broadens everyone’s knowledge. This assignment helps us practice smany important skills such as: scanning, communicating, talking, making presentations and gaining group discussion skills. We know that tourists always feel comfortable with system hotelhotel resorts in Vietnam. This knowledge about hotel will helps us good study and know about hotel and have opportunity to develop for getting a job in the future."
What do you mean with “hotel system” Is it a hotel chain? Is every single system a hotel resort? Are all 6 systems situated at Quarter Old? Are there six groups and each group visit one of the hotels system? By not knowing all this I had difficulties to see whether a plural or singular word is correct.
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