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    Ashiuhto is offline Senior Member
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    Default floric at the beach

    Please check the following paragraph.

    I loved my trip to Kenting inTaiwan. I went there with my friends. We swam and played water sports, like kiteboarding, windsurfing and surfing. On the beach, we frolicked, played balls and enjoyed the sunshine. Because Kenting has a lot of funny activities, we love it and want to go there next time.

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    Default Re: floric at the beach

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    Please check the following paragraph.

    I loved my trip to Kenting in [space] Taiwan. I went there with my friends. We swam and played water sports, like kiteboarding, windsurfing and surfing. On the beach, we frolicked, played balls and enjoyed the sunshine. Because Kenting has a lot of funny activities, we love it and want to go there again next time.
    "Frolicked" is a rather old fashioned word.

    You can say you want to go there again, you want to return there, you want to go there on your next vacation as well, but to say "you want to go there next time" alone makes it sound like you have not yet been there at all.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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