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I love my trip to Hualien. Firstly, it was a wonderful memory to me in Hualien. I went there with my classmates and teacher to celebrate our graduation. Second, it is a beautiful place to go. There are sublime mountain scenery and mighty ocean. Third, it is a beautiful county that is different from here in Taoyuan. You can get another feelings there. If I have time, I will go to Hualien again. Especially, Taroko National Park.
Last edited by Ashiuhto; 16-Feb-2012 at 03:10. Reason: revise