Editing Errors in Compacta Grammer

[dj_dipuu]

Hi ,

I have a BBC compacta grammer and I have to edit the following paragraphs and make correction. I just want to make sure If I have done it correctly ? I'll write corrections with red font in brackets . There is error in each line .. P.S there is only one error in each line.

1) It is impossible to understood (Understand) generation
next or to tackle us(them). All that elders
do is just keep (Keeping) quite and close their
eyes. And ( and with out period) is it right on their part
to doing (do) so ? Teenagers are very
confident on (at) what they do and
which(what) they want to do. They
think them to be ( we'll remove be) independent.

2) "So you want other(another) day off",
shouted the officer manager on (at) his clerk
I'm anxious to hear which (what) excuse you
have now. You have went(gone) for
yours (your) grandfather's funeral twice.
already". A clerk smiled sheepishly ( didn't see any mistake )
and said,"Today mine(my) grandmother
was (is) getting married again".

3) Three is an importance(important) number in
geometry. A triangle is an (the) strongest
form on (of ) construction. A Triangle
form the base of (for) three dimensional
Pyramid. It is considered the more(most)
stable and (the) strongest of each
shapes (shape). Triangles has innumerable
uses in science and everyday lives(life).

4) The concern about global warming has(is)
not that it's happening, and that (didn't find error)
its (it's) being hastened by modern man.
It is also occurring at a far great (didn't find error)
rate then(than) the natural evolutionary.
process. We are cut (cutting) down trees,
forcing the extinction of much(most)
species and polluted (polluting) the environment.

5) A 25 Million year old fossil have(has)
revealed that a predecessor to Australia's (Australian's)
iconic hopping Kangaroo once gallops (didn't find error)
on each fours(four), had dog like
fangs and possible(possibly) climed trees,
scientists have reporting (reported)

Uff so much of typing ! thanks for your help in advance

 

[bhaisahab]

Hi ,

I have a BBC compacta grammer and I have to edit the following paragraphs and make correction. I just want to make sure If I have done it correctly ? I'll write corrections with red font in brackets . There is error in each line .. P.S there is only one error in each line.

1) It is impossible to understood (Understand) the next generation or to tackle us(them). All that elders
do is keep quiet and close their
eyes. Is it right on their part
to doing (do) so? Teenagers are very
confident on (at) what they do and
which(what) they want to do. They
think themselves to be independent.

2) "So you want other(another) day off,
shouted the officer manager on (at) his clerk
I'm anxious to hear which (what) excuse you
have now. You have been to
yours (your) grandfather's funeral twice
already". The clerk smiled sheepishly ( didn't see any mistake )
and said,"Today mine(my) grandmother
was (is) getting married again".

3) Three is an importance(important) number in
geometry. A triangle is an (the) strongest
form on (of ) construction. A Triangle
forms the base of a three dimensional
Pyramid. It is considered the more
stable and (the) strongest of the
shapes. Triangles have innumerable
uses in science and everyday lives(life).

4) The concern about global warming has(is)
that it's happening, and that
its (it's) being hastened by modern man.
It is also occurring at a far greater
rate then(than) the natural evolutionary.
process. We are cut (cutting) down trees,
forcing the extinction of many
species and polluted (polluting) the environment.

5) A 25 Million year old fossil have(has)
revealed that a predecessor to Australia's
iconic hopping Kangaroo once galloped
on all fours, had dog like
fangs and possible(possibly) climbed trees,
scientists have reporting (reported)

Uff so much of typing ! thanks for your help in advance

Bhai.

 

[dj_dipuu]

Bhai.

Thanks bhai a lot! But you have missed some and you have shuffled the lines as welll :lol:

These are some pending lines.

From 1) do is just keep (Keeping) quite and close their
eyes. And ( and with out period) is it right on their part
think them to be ( we'll remove be) independent.

From 4) not that it's happening, and that (didn't find error)

From 5) revealed that a predecessor to Australia's (Australian's)
iconic hopping Kangaroo once galloped (didn't find error)
on all fours(four), had dog like ( are you sure this is correct ?)

 

[bhaisahab]

From 5) "... revealed that a predecessor to Australia's iconic hopping Kangaroo once galloped on all fours, had dog like fangs and..."

From 1) "All that elders do is keep quiet and close their eyes. Is it right on their part
to do so?"
These are correct.