to give us a clearer copy

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thomas615

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Are there any errors in this sentence?

Can you give us a clearer copy of your document faxed to our office yesterday as there are some lines that are missing in the second paragraph on page 1.
 

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It was fine as it was, but I have made a couple of small changes.
Can you [STRIKE]give[/STRIKE] send us a clearer copy of [STRIKE]your[/STRIKE] the document you faxed to our office yesterday, as there are some lines that are missing in the second paragraph on page 1.
 
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