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    Please edit the passage

    Thinking in English is a dream that many of English learners hope to make it true, because it is the foundation to express your ideas in English freely. For Chinese students, however, to think partially or wholly in English is a difficult task. Yet it does not remain an impossible mission. My experience tells me that one of effective ways to achieve this goal is to read as many as possible original English works.

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    #2

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    Good. 168 views without commenting.

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    #3

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    Quote Originally Posted by NewHopeR View Post
    Thinking in English is something that many English learners hope to achieve. Thinking in English is the foundation of expressing your ideas in the language clearly. For Chinese students, however, thinking partially or wholly in English is difficult. Yet it is not an impossible task. My experience tells me that an effective way to achieve this goal is to read in English as much as possible.
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    #4

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    Thank you.

    Should "a something" be "something"? Besides, "read in English" would suggest that you read Chinese text in English (C-E translation) as well, different to "read original English articles."

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    #5

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    Quote Originally Posted by NewHopeR View Post
    Good. 168 views without commenting.
    Rudeness and sarcasm may be self-defeating in a place where people are volunteering to help.

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    Quote Originally Posted by NewHopeR View Post
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    HAHA that was awesome

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    #7

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    Quote Originally Posted by NewHopeR View Post
    Thank you.

    Should "a something" be "something"?
    Yes, it should, sorry.

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