Results 1 to 2 of 2
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • Kurdish
      • Home Country:
      • Syria
      • Current Location:
      • Syria

    • Join Date: Sep 2005
    • Posts: 122
    • Post Thanks / Like
    #1

    correct my grammatical and give better expression please ?

    Hello there my teachers
    this stories I translated it but I am still sure that there are some grammatical mistajes in my translation so please if you dont mind correct my mistakes and if its possible give better expression than mine
    -------------------
    I felt my mother came near to me and wanted to say something but
    she hesitated till I asked her
    what the wrong with you mother ?
    she replied: nothing
    then she went out and came back again
    I am in pain a little bit she said :
    oh! all right I will phone my father" I said
    she replied : No
    phone your brother he is in so and so home
    soon my brother come in house wondering
    " what is going here ' he said
    she is in pain " I replied "
    He smiled shyly and said :
    I will send for a car
    He went down a little then return with his friend's car ,
    ' common on ' he said
    and when we got out
    Oh my God ! unthinkable ! my mother is going to go with a car like this
    it's white car ornamented with red flowers
    it was nicly decorated to take the bride to her wedding party
    spent a lot of time to convince her to go with that car
    and may feeling pain forced her to
    ---------------
    regard
    hope anybody help me

    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • English Teacher
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • Japan

    • Join Date: Nov 2002
    • Posts: 44,225
    • Post Thanks / Like
    #2

    Re: correct my grammatical and give better expression please ?

    I felt my mother came- come
    what the wrong- what is wrong
    I am in pain a little bit- I am in a bit of pain
    so and so home- so-and-so's home
    then return with his- returned
    common on- come on
    spent a lot of time to convince her to go with that car I spent
    and may feeling pain forced her to- amybe the pain forced her to go

    PS- Why are you writing on separate lines? You also need to punctuate it.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •