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    Default I apply for voluntary to Germany. I`d really love someone to check over my CV. :]

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    First name(s) / Surname(s) Marjanne Priidik
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    Desired employment / Occupational field Youth leisure
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    Dates 06/06/2010 - 19/07/2010
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    Dates 22/06/2011 - 24/08/2011
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    Dates 07 September 2011 - 14 October 2011
    Occupation or position held Child-care worker
    Main activities and responsibilities I dealed with babysitting. I took care for my neighbor`s 2-years old child. I have also looked after my 3-years old niece named Eleri and after my younger brother. Even now I frequently haunt my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.
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    Title of qualification awarded Massiaru Primary school
    Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Grades 1 to 3.
    Dates 02/09/2003 - 16/06/2009
    Title of qualification awarded Uulu Basic School
    Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Basic education (grades 4 to 9)
    Dates 31/08/2009 - 22/06/2012
    Title of qualification awarded Pärnu Hansa Gymnasium
    Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Secondary Education (classes 10 to 12), media and humanitarian direction.
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    Mother tongue(s) Estonian
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    English C1 Proficient user B2 Independent user C1 Proficient user - - B2 Independent user
    Russian A1 Basic User A2 Basic User A1 Basic User - - A1 Basic User
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    Social skills and competences I`m smiling when greeting people and meeting and I often show my interest in others - for exaple asking how their day was. I always notice other people`s feeling and I`m generally cheerful, supportive, friendly and very active young.
    Organisational skills and competences I actively participate in different events and projects offered by our local youth reality named T.A.N.K.
    Computer skills and competences Microsoft Exel, Scratch, Graphics, Internet use, MS Word, File management, Keyboard skills
    Artistic skills and competences I have taken part in some projects related to my home region youth center T.A.N.K. For example I attended to in making film about how to victual healthfully.
    Other skills and competences My hobbies are especially taking photographs, drawing, meeting friends and examining other cultures. Futhermore I enjoy listening music and I also like different kinds of sports like cycling, running, swimming and playing basketball and volleyball.
    Additional information I am an independent, creative, open-minded, flexible person who take the responsibilities.Futhermore, I like travelling a lot, because for me other cultures and countries are very interesting. Espacially German culture and I would really love to practice my German.
    Annexes One volunteer from Austria inspired me more than I had been before. She stayed in my village for 6 months and she acquainted for us Austrian traditions which are quite similar to German`s. Moreover I got inspired by my German lessons - these made me seriously wonder about Gemany and its culture.

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    Default Re: I apply for voluntary to Germany. I`d really love someone to check over my CV. :]

    The formatting has made this almost impossible to deal with. Can you please just post the parts that have full paragraphs by typing in the information again? I realise that's more work for you, but the way the text has come out in your original post has just made it too difficult to edit. Thanks.

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    Default Re: I apply for voluntary to Germany. I`d really love someone to check over my CV. :]

    Okey. It seems to be really impossible to read. -.-
    Ok, I post the parts that have full paragraphs. :)

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    Occupation or position held Child-care worker
    Main activities and responsibilities I dealed with babysitting. I took care for my neighbor`s 2-years old child. I have also looked after my 3-years old niece named Eleri and after my younger brother. Even now I frequently haunt my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.
    Dates 1 Sep 00 - 7 May 03
    Title of qualification awarded Massiaru Primary school
    Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Grades 1 to 3.
    Dates 02/09/2003 - 16/06/2009
    Title of qualification awarded Uulu Basic School
    Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Basic education (grades 4 to 9)
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    Title of qualification awarded Pärnu Hansa Gymnasium
    Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Secondary Education (classes 10 to 12), media and humanitarian direction.



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    Default Re: I apply for voluntary to Germany. I`d really love someone to check over my CV. :]

    Social skills and competences I`m smiling when greeting people and meeting and I often show my interest in others - for exaple asking how their day was. I always notice other people`s feeling and I`m generally cheerful, supportive, friendly and very active young.
    Organisational skills and competences I actively participate in different events and projects offered by our local youth reality named T.A.N.K.
    Computer skills and competences Microsoft Exel, Scratch, Graphics, Internet use, MS Word, File management, Keyboard skills
    Artistic skills and competences I have taken part in some projects related to my home region youth center T.A.N.K. For example I attended to in making film about how to victual healthfully.
    Other skills and competences My hobbies are especially taking photographs, drawing, meeting friends and examining other cultures. Futhermore I enjoy listening music and I also like different kinds of sports like cycling, running, swimming and playing basketball and volleyball.
    Additional information I am an independent, creative, open-minded, flexible person who take the responsibilities.Futhermore, I like travelling a lot, because for me other cultures and countries are very interesting. Espacially German culture and I would really love to practice my German.
    Annexes One volunteer from Austria inspired me more than I had been before. She stayed in my village for 6 months and she acquainted for us Austrian traditions which are quite similar to German`s. Moreover I got inspired by my German lessons - these made me seriously wonder about Gemany and its culture.







    Thanks for reading. :))

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    Default Re: I apply for voluntary to Germany. I`d really love someone to check over my CV. :]

    Quote Originally Posted by -AngerWing- View Post
    Occupation or position held Child-care worker
    Main activities and responsibilities I dealed with babysitting. I have babysat a lot. I took care for of my neighbor`s 2-years old two-year-old child. I have also looked after my 3-years old three-year-old niece named Eleri and after my younger brother. Even now I frequently haunt!!! (have you looked up "to haunt" in the dictionary. Are you a ghost?) my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.
    Dates 1 Sep 00 - 7 May 03
    Title of qualification awarded Massiaru Primary school
    Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Grades 1 to 3.
    Dates 02/09/2003 - 16/06/2009
    Title of qualification awarded Uulu Basic School
    Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Basic education (grades 4 to 9)
    Dates 31/08/2009 - 22/06/2012
    Title of qualification awarded Pärnu Hansa Gymnasium
    Principal subjects / occupational skills covered Secondary Education (classes 10 to 12), media and humanitarian direction.


    See above. You definitely need to check on "to haunt". I have no idea what you meant but "haunt" is certainly not the right word.

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    Default Re: I apply for voluntary to Germany. I`d really love someone to check over my CV. :]

    Quote Originally Posted by -AngerWing- View Post
    Social skills and competencies I`m smiling I always smile when greeting people and meeting when I meet people and I often show my interest in others - for example asking how their day was. I always notice other people`s feeling and I`m generally cheerful, supportive, friendly and very active. young.
    Organisational skills and competencies I actively participate in different events and projects offered by our local youth reality group, named T.A.N.K.
    Computer skills and competencies Microsoft Excel, Scratch, Graphics, Internet use, MS Word, File management, Keyboard skills
    Artistic skills and competencies I have taken part in some projects related to my home region youth center T.A.N.K. For example, I attended to in making a film about how to victual healthfully I don't know what you mean here. What do you mean by "victual"? And "healthfully" is not a word. Please try this part of the sentence again.
    Other skills and competencies My hobbies are especially taking photographs, drawing, meeting friends and examining studying other cultures. Furthermore I enjoy listening to music and I also like different kinds of sports like cycling, running, swimming and playing basketball and volleyball.
    Additional information I am an independent, creative, open-minded, flexible person who take the responsibilities and I take my responsibilities very seriously. Furthermore, I like travelling a lot, because for me other cultures and countries are very interesting, especially German culture, and I would really love to practice my German.
    Annexes One volunteer from Austria inspired me more than I had been inspired before. She stayed in my village for 6 months and she acquainted for us taught us about Austrian traditions which are quite similar to German's traditions. Moreover I got I am also inspired by my German lessons - these made make me seriously wonder curious about Gemany and its culture.







    Thanks for reading. :))
    See above. I have made some more amendments. I am wondering why you are having to complete this application in English if it's for a German volunteer program. You say in the application that you want to study and practice your German. It would have made more sense if the application form was in German.

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    Default Re: I apply for voluntary to Germany. I`d really love someone to check over my CV. :]

    I dealed with babysitting
    .
    I have babysat a lot
    . I took care
    for
    of
    my neighbor`s
    2-years old
    two-year-old
    child. I have also looked after my
    3-years old
    three-year-old
    niece
    named Eleri
    and
    after
    my younger brother. Even now I frequently
    haunt!!! (have you looked up "to haunt" in the dictionary. Are you a ghost?)
    my niece and sometimes I look after her at the weekends.

    Heehe, sorry. I made a big mistake. XD I`m embarrassed. I don`t know what I wanted to say.
    I made so :
    Even now I sometimes look after her at the weekends.

    See above. I have made some more amendments. I am wondering why you are having to complete this application in English if it's for a German volunteer program. You say in the application that you want to study and practice your German. It would have made more sense if the application form was in German.

    I also want to practise me English too, bcz without practice of my language I couln`t cope with university. :/

    But thank U so much for the help. :]



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