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    Default how would you improve this?

    Hello everyone

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    Do you need a "newspaper" english version

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    I would really appreciate your opnion on this.

    thank you

    daniel

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    Red face Re: how would you improve this?

    Quote Originally Posted by danielkramer
    Hello everyone

    If you prefer to receive this mail in txt format please contact ............

    Do you need a "newspaper" english version

    if you prefer not to receive these kind of mails in the future, please contact.................

    I would really appreciate your opnion on this.

    thank you

    daniel
    Hi Daniel,

    If you would prefer to receive this mail in text format, please contact....

    Do you want an English version of this newspaper?

    If you do not want to receive further mail, please contact....
    or
    If you prefer not to receive this kind of mail, please contact...

    Hope it helps,
    Dippit

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    Default Re: how would you improve this?

    Hello Dippit

    Thatís Perfect, thank you very, very much

    Daniel

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