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  1. #1
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    Default how would you improve this?

    Hello everyone
    I would really appreciate your opnion on the following:


    If you prefer to receive this mail in txt format please contact ............

    Do you need a "newspaper" english version

    if you prefer not to receive these kind of mails in the future, please contact.................

    thank you

    daniel

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    Default Re: how would you improve this?

    Hi all forum members! This is my first post. I am here on the suggestion of a fellow forum member.


    Daniel: Can you first explain what a "newspaper" English version is? Do you mean a "paper" or "print" version?
    Quote Originally Posted by danielkramer
    Do you need a "newspaper" english version

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    Default Re: how would you improve this?

    hello VenusEnvy

    its the print version.

    thanks
    Daniel

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    Tdol is offline Editor, UsingEnglish.com
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    Default Re: how would you improve this?

    I'd use 'print version' then- I didn't know what it meant until I scrolled down. You could use 'if you would prefer' as well, which might be seen by some as politer.

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