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    Default A tv show that I dislike - Please correct my narative

    To be completely honest, there are so many tv shows that I dislike, because it seems like everyone wants to see people fighting with each other, or boring stuff about our VIPs lives, but I'm not that kind of man.


    Whatever, there is a tv show that I really dislike. It is called "Acces Direct". The fact that bothers me is that it is a very successful show in our country. Personally, I hate watching people showing their bad habits on tv, or hearing really bad news that I already heard before. There is no originality in this tv show and the only thing its producers are counting on is that their guests are going to scream to each other, so that people would be interested in what's going on and watching the show.


    However, there are lots of people watching it everyday, so I suppose there may be a problem with me. Actually, there are just a couple of Romanian tv shows that I'm watching and the rest of them are just uninteresting, boring shows.


    So, in conclusion, I might be picky, but I think the Romanian television is getting worse and worse, everyday.

    Can anyone correct this narative, please ?

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    Default Re: A tv show that I dislike - Please correct my narative

    Quote Originally Posted by TataruC View Post
    To be completely honest, there are so many tv TV shows that I dislike. because It seems like as if everyone wants to see people fighting with each other, or boring stuff about our VIPs' lives, but I'm not that kind of man.


    WhateverHowever, there is a one particular tv TV show that I really dislike. It is called "Acces Direct". The fact that What bothers me is that it is a very successful show in our country. Personally, I hate watching people showing their bad habits on tv TV, or hearing really bad news that I have already heard. before. There is no originality in this tv TV show and the only thing its producers are counting on is that their guests are going to scream to at each other so that people would will be interested in what's going on and watching the show.


    However, there are lots of people watching it everyday, so I suppose there may be a problem with me. Actually, there are just a couple of Romanian tv TV shows that I'm watching (or that I watch) and the rest of them are just uninteresting, boring shows.


    So, in conclusion, I might be picky, but I think the Romanian television is getting worse and worse (no comma) everyday every day.

    Can anyone correct this narative, please?
    See above.

    "TV" is always capitalised.

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    Default Re: A tv show that I dislike - Please correct my narative

    Thank you so much !

    I wish you a good day !

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    Default Re: A tv show that I dislike - Please correct my narative

    Quote Originally Posted by TataruC View Post
    Thank you so much!

    I wish you a good day!
    You're welcome. Did my amendments make sense? One more thing - we don't put a space before the final punctuation mark in a sentence, so the last word of a sentence should be followed immediately by the full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.

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    Default Re: A tv show that I dislike - Please correct my narative

    Once again, thank you!

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    Default Re: A tv show that I dislike - Please correct my narative

    There is a spelling mistake. "narrative not narative"

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