Application for a laboratory

[Rivi87]

Hello,

within my study i want to do a lab in great britain and need to write letters to some institutes there. I am not really sure with my grammar and would be happy if someone could have a look at my writings.

Thanks!

Stefan

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Dear Professor XYZ



Within my postgraduate master study in Lübeck (Germany) I am looking for a three month laboratory from 15th September to 15th December 2012 to earn practical skills in molecular biology methods and to have a look at the scientific world in Scotland. My present studies in life sciences in undergraduate bachelor studies from Hannover, and also from Lübeck, were widely ranged and so I am open-minded about new methods and would be happy to learn a lot of thinks. Because of my interests in molecular biology and as well in Glasgow, your institute seems to be the perfect place to do such laboratory. I would be very happy about an answer and if you need any further information about me or the lab, feel free to ask. You will find my curriculum vitae in the e-mail attachment.


Yours sincerely

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[billmcd]

Hello,

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Thanks!

Stefan

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Dear Professor XYZ



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Yours sincerely,

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