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People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example
new experiences, career preparation, and increased knowledge). Why do you think
people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to
support your answer?
I think that the people go to the college or university to performance her/his their careers. Some reasons of them are:
- to understand and amplify the deepen the knowledge in a determined area
- to explore a different life experience - to organize the ideas and preferences in a determined topic to meet with people interested in the same subject - to
investigatedinvestigate a specific area,
- to have better income in the future.
For me these are those people who are interested in studying
acareer oriented skills inthrough a formal high level education.
When the these people
arein the high school have some inclined forshow a tendency toward a specific issuesissue, but don'tonly have the enoughlimited knowledge about the topic, so he/she they decidehave taken the chance to understand and triedtry to find the career that she/he they really like.
We need to have a process and learn a lot of subjects that
helpshelp us to establish our preferences. The university is a new way to perceive the world. In this place we can have the tools to confront a problem we have tosuch as teachers, classmates and appropriate equipment classmatesthat can help us to understand the problem that we need to solve.
Research is important to make a developed country and this is another impulse for people to attend a college or university. It motivates students
haveto do better useful things and contribute into the progress of the country. In the university we can find people that are interested in the same issues and we can make associations to solve some problematic in the society. The last aspect is the income -- if you have the knowledge over something you can find a job or even make establish a specific company and raise the revenues.
Finally it can be said that the people
whichwho attend tothe university contributedcontribute to the society and helpshelp with his/her their countryís developeddevelopment. Her/his Their lifestyleslifestyle get better, so the individual condition changes and shows us new, renewable and creative ideas, laws, processes, created jobs and more conditions that help with the progress of the community.