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    hello
    would you correct the following sentences?

    1- I always feel happy seeing my friends.
    2- Most of the accidents are due to the driver's speed and sleepiness
    3- Yesterday i hit a car.(i as a passenger hit a car)
    4- I can't walk any longer.
    5- Smoking is forbiden in public.
    6- Just the drops of my tears knows the secret of my silence.
    7- The other name for forest is the realm of animals.
    8- I hope to achieve my dreams.
    9- Life is running like blood in vessels.
    10- Three candidates participated in elections or there are 3 candidates in this elections.
    11- I paticipate in election and vote.
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    Please repost your thead with correct use of capitals. As an English teacher you should try to set a good example to students.

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    thanks for your comment !!!!

    would you correct the following sentences?

    1- I always feel happy seeing my friends.
    2- Most of the accidents are due to the driver's speed and sleepiness.
    3- Yesterday i hit a car.(i as a pedestrian hit a car)
    4- I can't walk any longer.
    5- Smoking is forbiden in public.
    6- Just the drops of my tears knows the secret of my silence.
    7- The other name for forest is the realm of animals.
    8- I hope to achieve my dreams.
    9- Life is running like blood in vessels.
    10- Three candidates participated in elections or there are 3 candidates in this elections.
    11- I will paticipate in election and i will vote to my favourite candidate.

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    Quote Originally Posted by skystar30097 View Post
    Thanks for your comment!

    Would you correct the following sentences please?

    1- I always feel happy seeing my friends. OK.
    2- Most accidents are due to the driver's speed and tiredness.
    3- Yesterday I hit a car. It's grammatical.
    4- I can't walk any longer. OK.
    5- Smoking is forbidden in public. OK.
    6- Just the drops of my tears knows the secret of my silence.
    7- The other name for forest is the realm of animals.
    8- I hope to achieve my dreams. OK.
    9- Life is running like blood in vessels.
    10- Three candidates participated in elections or there are 3 candidates in this elections.
    11- I will paticipate in election and i will vote to my favourite candidate.
    Bhai.

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    Default Re: writing

    Thank you so much. I appreciate your helpful comments, esp about using capital letters.

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