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Thank you for your email. As I mentioned earlier I’m really interested in taking photos. So, I want to continue my education in Canada by taking a short course in
adigital photography. I think it would be a good addition to my primary degree.
I would be pleased if you could help me
with collectingto collect relevant information about courses, such as subjects which are included, cost, duration, etc.
I’m thrilled to hear that I can share a flat with your friends
and at the same time making new friends and saving money on accommodations.because I'll be able to make new friends at the same time as saving money on accommodation.
Regarding our leisure time, I would prefer
doingto make a trip to the Rocky Mountains because I really like magnificent natural landscapes and maybe I’ll have the opportunity to practice intaking photos.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.