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    Default a beacon to me

    Please help me corect the following redundant sentences.

    When I fell down, he would always be there to give me a hand. When I got lost, he would always show me the right way. When I went astray, he was always a beacon to me.

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    There is nothing to correct. The writer is hammering home a point

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