1. ## relative clauses

Hi,

If you are a guy who doesn't glare at a girl for hours who walks in the street, you are a different guy.

I couldn't figure out where to put 'for hours' in that sentence. (P.S I want to say that the guy glares at a girl).

If you are a guy who doesn't glare at a girl who walks in the street for hours, you are a different guy.

If we construct the sentence as above, we will have infered that the girl walks for hours.
I couldn't find because there are 2 relative clauses. I have been confused.

2. ## Re: relative clauses

Originally Posted by aysaa
Hi,

If you are a guy who doesn't glare at a girl for hours who walks in the street, you are a different guy.

I couldn't figure out where to put 'for hours' in that sentence. (P.S I want to say that the guy glares at a girl).

If you are a guy who doesn't glare at a girl who walks in the street for hours, you are a different guy.

If we construct the sentence as above, we will have infered that the girl walks for hours.
I couldn't find because there are 2 relative clauses. I have been confused.

Both are unnatural.

3. ## Re: relative clauses

Could you please make them better?

4. ## Re: relative clauses

Originally Posted by aysaa
Could you please make them better?
"If you are a guy who doesn't stare at girls walking in the street, you are a different sort of guy."

5. ## Re: relative clauses

Thanks...That is what I want to utter. But I want to put 'for hours' in that sentence. And I don't know where to put.

"If you are a guy who doesn't stare at girls walking in the street for hours, you are a different sort of guy."

• or

"If you are a guy who doesn't stare at girls for hours walking in the street, you are a different sort of guy."

6. ## Re: relative clauses

Originally Posted by aysaa
Thanks...That is what I want to utter. But I want to put 'for hours' in that sentence. And I don't know where to put.

"If you are a guy who doesn't stare at girls walking in the street for hours, you are a different sort of guy."

• or

"If you are a guy who doesn't stare at girls for hours walking in the street, you are a different sort of guy."

"If you are a guy who doesn't stare for hours at girls walking in the street..."

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