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    Help me on sentence 1 if it is incorrect. Thanks.

    The superior court of Guangdong province is expected to give its decision on who will win over the legal rights to use iPad brand name for their products sold in China, Apple Inc., or Weiguan, an information technology company headquartered in Taiwan.

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    Re: Help me on sentence 1 if it is incorrect. Thanks.

    Another writing.

    It is estimated that the Justice of Guangdong Provincial Superior People's Court will soon announce the date to reveal the trial results. It will provide a decision on either Apple or Proview Technology (headquarter is located in Taiwan) has the exclusive right to use the IPAD trademark for the sales within the territory of China.

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    Re: Help me on sentence 1 if it is incorrect. Thanks.

    How about:

    The superior court of Guangdong province is expected to give its decision on whether
    Apple Inc. or Weiguan, an information technology company based in Taiwan, will win the legal right to use iPad brand name for their products sold in China.

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