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    Default Then came the day that changed Luke's life.

    Then came the day that changed Luke's life.


    The sentence is from a story book for kids. I wonder why the inversion happened.

    The original sentence must be 'Then, the day that changed Luke's life came' - I think



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    Default Re: Then came the day that changed Luke's life.

    Quote Originally Posted by wotcha View Post
    Then came the day that changed Luke's life.


    The sentence is from a story book for kids. I wonder why the inversion happened.

    The original sentence must be 'Then, the day that changed Luke's life then came' - I think



    Thank you.
    Without the second "then" your version is fine, as is the original.

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    Default Re: Then came the day that changed Luke's life.

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    Without the second "then" your version is fine, as is the original.

    I corrected. I'm still confused why the inversion happens in this sentence. ㅠㅜ

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    Default Re: Then came the day that changed Luke's life.

    Quote Originally Posted by wotcha View Post
    I corrected. I'm still confused why the inversion happens in this sentence. ㅠㅜ
    It's just another way of saying it.

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