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    Is this sentence correct?

    "The more failures children make, the more chances they become successful."

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    Quote Originally Posted by jiangyueming View Post
    Is this sentence correct?

    "The more failures children make, the more chances they become successful."

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    "The more failures children make, the more chances they have to become successful."
    This makes more sense, if you agree with the logic.

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    Thanks.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jiangyueming View Post
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    "The more failures children make, the more chances they become successful."

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    The more failures a child makes, the more chance there is of him becoming successful.
    The more failures children make, the higher the chance of them becoming successful.

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    Thanks a lot.

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