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    Need advice for fine-tuning a sentence, thx teachers!

    Does the following sentence need fine-tuning? Thanks teachers

    My teacher explained to me what would happen if we didn't eat breakfast.

    Please advise, thanks

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    Red face Re: Need advice for fine-tuning a sentence, thx teachers!

    Hi Help Wanted,

    You could be clearer by saying either -

    'My teacher explained to me what would happen if I didn't eat breakfast.'
    or
    'Our teacher explained to us what would happen if we didn't eat breakfast.'

    Hope this is of help,
    dippit


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    Re: Need advice for fine-tuning a sentence, thx teachers!

    Thanks sooo much for your advice, Dippit. ^^

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