Please make it terser

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NewHope

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For the treatment of patients with respiratory disease, especially for the treatment of patients with gastrointestinal tract intolerance, drug X is expected to be an important substitute for drug Y.
 

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For the treatment of patients with respiratory disease, especially for the treatment of patients with gastrointestinal tract intolerance, drug X is expected to be an important substitute for drug Y.
"For respiratory disease, especially in GI intolerance, X is likely to be superior to Y."
 

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