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    Please edit the sentence

    The road lead to success is not only zigzag and uneven, but also full of thorns and traps.

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    Re: Please edit the sentence

    Is the sentence unintelligible?

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    Re: Please edit the sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by NewHope View Post
    The road to success not only zigzags and is uneven, but it is also full of thorns and traps.
    Keeping as close to your original words as possible.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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