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    Default Improvement(s) and it reads odd

    Dear Teachers

    Should I put improvementS in the following sentence? And, I think the sentence reads odd, but don't know how to improve. Please kindly advise.

    US high yield well supported: benign improvement(s) employment and corporate earnings continue
    to support the USA, the largest and most developed high-yield market in which we prefer
    single-B debt securities to high-grade debt.


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    Anthony the learner

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    Default Re: Improvement(s) and it reads odd

    Quote Originally Posted by patran View Post
    Dear Teachers

    Should I put improvementS in the following sentence? And, I think the sentence reads odd, but don't know how to improve. Please kindly advise.

    US high yield well supported: benign improvement(s) employment and corporate earnings continue
    to support the USA, the largest and most developed high-yield market in which we prefer
    single-B debt securities to high-grade debt.


    Regards

    Anthony the learner
    It makes very little sense. I can't improve it because it's not clear what you want to say.

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