what do You think of my video - my voice & pronunciation? (--- no download--- )

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what do You think of my video -
my voice & pronunciation?


is it pleasant?
annoying?
is it OK or not?

sounds great?
or makes you turn it off ASAP vice versa?

how many points out of 100 can you give me for this video?


youtube.com/watch?v=MxURWgdEfuY&feature=related

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---important --- THIS IS P2 of the video
I send you straignt to part2 (not 1) cause I don't like how I sound in the beginning of part1



THANK YOU :))))))) for YOUR OBJECTIVE OPINION!
 

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Re: what do You think of my video - my voice & pronunciation? (--- no download--- )

what do You think of my video -
my voice & pronunciation?


is it pleasant?
annoying?
is it OK or not?

sounds great?
or makes you turn it off ASAP vice versa?

how many points out of 100 can you give me for this video?


youtube.com/watch?v=MxURWgdEfuY&feature=related

******************************
---important --- THIS IS P2 of the video
I send you straignt to part2 (not 1) cause I don't like how I sound in the beginning of part1



THANK YOU :))))))) for YOUR OBJECTIVE OPINION!
I find your tone of voice quite irritating, though no more than that epilepsy-inducing animation.
 

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Re: what do You think of my video - my voice & pronunciation? (--- no download--- )

What do you think of my video?
My voice and pronunciation?

Is it pleasant? No.
Annoying? Yes.
Is it OK or not? I only continued to listen to it because you had posted here asking for an opinion. If I had found it independently on YouTube, I would have switched off after about ten seconds.

Does it sound great? No.
Or does it make you turn it off ASAP or vice versa?

How many points out of 100 can you give me for this video? 10.


youtube.com/watch?v=MxURWgdEfuY&feature=related

******************************
---important --- THIS IS P2 of the video
I send you straignt to part2 (not 1) cause I don't like how I sound in the beginning of part1



THANK YOU :))))))) for YOUR OBJECTIVE OPINION!

My opinion (and my amendments to your post) are above, in red.

I'm sorry but I found it very difficult to listen to. Your rising and falling pitch made it difficult to follow. Your phrasing is off quite a lot (breaths and pauses in the wrong places).

You use "for sure" far too many times. I think you need to check the meaning of "my unique situation" too. There are so many disclaimers about the fact that you're not an expert and that people should get the opinion of "several great experts" that I would be actively put off this table on the basis that it sounds like it's going to do me some damage.
 
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