[Essay] self-introduction

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Ashiuhto

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Please check the following paragraph.

An Introduction of Myself

My name is Rosa. I’m an optimistic person who likes to play jokes on people. My favorite subject is English, which is an useful language. With English, we can communicate with foreigners and make it easy going abroad. When I study, I always spend much time on it. Not only it’s my favorite subject , but also I can acquire more knowledge. All in all, if you have something in common with me or the same interests as me, welcome to be my friends. I’ll be glad to share my learning experience with you.
 

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An Introduction of Myself

My name is Rosa. I’m an optimistic person who likes to play jokes on people. My favorite subject is English, which is [STRIKE]an[/STRIKE] a useful language. With English, we can communicate with foreigners who speak English and make it easy going abroad. When I study, I always spend much time on it. Not only [STRIKE]it’s[/STRIKE] is it my favorite subject , but also I can acquire more knowledge by using it. All in all, if you have something in common with me or have the same interests as me, you are welcome to be my friend[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE]. I’ll be glad to share my learning experience with you.

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Ashiuhto

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Thanks a lot for your correction which helps me a lot. Please check another paragraph "struck in my mind."
 
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