darkor22
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[FONT="]I was ask to Revise the following sentences as necessary to eliminate any errors in parallel structure.
[/FONT] 1. I remember watching it the first time, realizing I’d never seen anything like it, and immediately vowed never to miss an episode of The Daily Show.
2. A crowd stood outside the school and were watching as the graduates paraded by.
3. An effective Web site is well designed, provides use full information, and links are given to other relevant sites.
4. It is impossible to watch The Office and not seeing a little of yourself in on the characters.
5. Lila was the winner not only of the pie-eating contest but also won the yodeling competition.
and here are my answer..
1. I remember watching it for the first time and realized I’d never seen anything like it. Immediately I vowed never to miss an episode of The Daily Show.
2. A crowd stood outside the school watching as the graduates paraded by.
3. An effective web site is well designed, provides use full information, and lings to other relevant sites.
4. It is impossible to watch The Office and not see a little of yourself in one of the characters.
5. Lila was the winner of the pie-eating and yodeling competitions.
[FONT="]any help will be very appreciated..
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[/FONT] 1. I remember watching it the first time, realizing I’d never seen anything like it, and immediately vowed never to miss an episode of The Daily Show.
2. A crowd stood outside the school and were watching as the graduates paraded by.
3. An effective Web site is well designed, provides use full information, and links are given to other relevant sites.
4. It is impossible to watch The Office and not seeing a little of yourself in on the characters.
5. Lila was the winner not only of the pie-eating contest but also won the yodeling competition.
and here are my answer..
1. I remember watching it for the first time and realized I’d never seen anything like it. Immediately I vowed never to miss an episode of The Daily Show.
2. A crowd stood outside the school watching as the graduates paraded by.
3. An effective web site is well designed, provides use full information, and lings to other relevant sites.
4. It is impossible to watch The Office and not see a little of yourself in one of the characters.
5. Lila was the winner of the pie-eating and yodeling competitions.
[FONT="]any help will be very appreciated..
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