Please check the following paragraph and suggest your opinions about this.
"I am kabi. I am staying at soolai with my family. I have completed my UG course in XXX university and PG course in XXX university. I have been working here in XXX(company name) since 2010. Before joining this company ,I was working in XXX (previous company name). Here my role is XXX..Reason to shifted here is to improve my carrier growth.My colleagues are very friendly and motivate me always. My hobbies are listening music, reading books and watching movies. I am very much intrested to spend time with my son. His age is xxx. He is in 5th std. I am very much pleasure to talk with you. This is all about me. Nice to meet you".
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