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    Thumbs up Would you mind helping me to check out these three sentences? Thank you.

    If professors pay too much attention on doing researches, students probably will be neglected. Maybe professors are too busy to answer students' questions. Even worse, some professors may ask their assistants to teach students in the whole semester.

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    Re: Would you mind helping me to check out these three sentences? Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by heyuting View Post
    If professors pay too much attention on doing researches, students probably will be neglected. Maybe professors are too busy to answering students' questions. Even worse, some professors may ask their assistants to teach students in the whole semester.
    b.

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    Re: Would you mind helping me to check out these three sentences? Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by heyuting View Post
    If professors pay too much attention on doing to researches, students probably will probably be neglected. Maybe Professors are might be too busy to answer students' questions. Even worse, some professors may ask their assistants to teach students in for the whole semester.
    My suggestions are above.

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    Re: Would you mind helping me to check out these three sentences? Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    My suggestions are above.
    You've changed the meaning;
    If professors pay too much attention to
    research is not the same. The difference is small but there is a difference

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