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    Dooli is offline Newbie
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    Question Really short essay> Please correct this!

    It became dark outside, and my ambitious goals look like it's going to totally fail. I paced away all day long doing nothing -literally, NOTHING! ... but, I have to remind that "tomorrow is another day" not to be down in the depth of despair. Retracing my old days, I remember how bleak the future seemed but anyway I has managed to hang in there.. and here I am... it's a small consolation to myself, or it is, in some way, just coward excuse. and ok, that doesn't matter. What is important is I am planning to START OVER AGAIN!

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    Re: Really short essay> Please correct this!

    It became dark outside, and my ambitious goals look like they’re going to fail totally. I paced away all day long doing nothing -literally, NOTHING! ... but, I have to remind myself that "tomorrow is another day" not to be down in the depth of despair. Retracing my old days, I remember how bleak the future seemed but anyway I have managed to hang in there. And here I am... it's a small consolation, or it is, in some way, just a coward excuse. And ok, that doesn't matter. What is important is that I am planning to START OVER AGAIN!

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