Help me to correct this crime
I have written a simple play about a crime and I need your help to correct it. This is a part of the play.
Police Officer: What is the matter? Why are you in such a
hurryinghurry? Man: Nothing, nothing
Police Officer: Why are you afraid?
Man: There, there
areis a dead man in the zoo.
Police Officer: Where did you see that?
Man: Over there in the giraffe cage.
Police Officer: Take us to the place!
((After they arrived
toat the place)) Police Officer: He died; call the emergency and the inspector!
Doctor: He died by hanging; this is the rope and there
is an impact on the bodywere traces of injury around his neck. Inspector: PoliceOfficer, take the evidence to the lab! Where is the man who werewas in the placeon the scene of the crime?
am herewas there, sir.
Inspector: Tell us, what happened exactly?
I can accept any suggestions.
februar, no teacher
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