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    Teacher, I am trying to improve my reported speech. Can you please check the paragraph for errors.


    I telephoned Mr. Xing's office yesterday and spoke with Angela, his secretary. I referred her to our earlier telephone conversation a couple of days ago wherein I had told her that there was a typo in their Sales Manager's report regarding the date. I told Angela that we had taken another look at the report and we realized that the given date was correct. I apologized to Angela for the confusion.

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    Quote Originally Posted by thomas615 View Post
    Teacher, I am trying to improve my reported speech. Can you please check the paragraph for errors.


    I telephoned Mr. Xing's office yesterday and spoke with Angela, his secretary. I referred her to referenced our earlier telephone conversation of a couple of days ago wherein I had told her that there was a typo in their Sales Manager's report regarding the date. I told Angela that we had taken another look at the report and we realized that the given date was correct. I apologized to Angela for the confusion.
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