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    Default Could you correct it, if needed?

    Hi teachers,
    Could you correct it, if needed?
    I have already deposited the money in your bank account.
    I have already transferred the money to your bank account. (through the Internet)
    I also attach the invoice.

    Thanks in advance.
    Last edited by learning54; 04-May-2012 at 13:24.

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    Default Re: Could you correct it, if needed?

    I have also attached the invoice.

    Sentence 2 is correct.

    In sentence 1, you might be more likely to hear "deposited the money into your bank account."

    (not a teacher, just a language lover)

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    Default Re: Could you correct it, if needed?

    Hi,
    Thank you for your reply and help.

    L54

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