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    Thumbs up Please help me by correcting these sentences. Thank you.

    I prefer to carry my cell phone all the time, because when I was boring I would like to log in Facebook to watch my friendsí new feeds. It lets me know what happened to my friends. Sometimes they want to share their happiness with me or need some help, I will know it immediately. Moreover, if I donít carry my cell phone all the time, when my parents want to inform me of something important, they can not contact me instantly.

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    Default Re: Please help me by correcting these sentences. Thank you.

    Quote Originally Posted by heyuting View Post
    I prefer to carry my cell phone all the time, because when I was boring I would like to log in Facebook to watch my friends’ new feeds. It lets me know what happened to my friends. Sometimes they want to share their happiness with me or need some help, I will know it immediately. Moreover, if I don’t carry my cell phone all the time, when my parents want to inform me of something important, they can not contact me instantly.
    I prefer to carry my cell phone all the time because when I am bored I like to log into Facebook to watch my friends’ new feeds. It lets me know what happened to my friends. Sometimes they want to share their happiness with me or need some help, and I will know about it immediately. Moreover, if I don’t carry my cell phone all the time, when my parents want to inform me of something important, they cannot contact me instantly.

    Boring - you make other people feel bored
    Bored - how you feel
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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