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(Topic 2) days the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or a negative development?
In this new era of science and technology, life has become very fast paced and has changed a lot since the times of our childhood.
With the advent of new technology in nearly every sphere of life, even mass media and other ways of communication have become faster. Now people just need to dial a few
nonumbers with theretheir fingertips to talk to their near and dear ones, no matter what the distance is. For instance, sitting at home a person can chat and see what his relatives are doing overseas. This is all due to advanced technology using internets and mobile phones.
Now a person can keep a track of each and every news of his family as well as the world. The distances between people now don’t matter, as they did in the olden days, when people waited long before
recievingreceiving any news of their near and dear one by telegrams, letters etc.
Thus, technology has
definatelydefinitely improved the ways in which people can interact with each other, be it with friends or relatives and helped them to be in constant touch via mobiles, internet chatting sites, or social networking sites. Even yhethe letter posts delivery time has shortened so important news or documents now reach people much moreearlier and safely (safer).
Although (no comma) technology has brought about great help in bringing people closer,
butnow people have become so much dependantdependent on it that life seems handicapped if the facilities are not available even for a brief period of time a short time. Apart from this due to television, internet and various other means of mass communication, people give up much of their time in entertainment provided by these mediasmedia and thus get less time for their friends and relatives. Their lives have become too hectic toso that they not even find outtime for one’stheir own family. This in a way or another is increasing the gaps among people.
So, in nutshell I would like to say that technology has
definatelydefinitely changed our lifestyleslifestyle as life has become much moreeasier, advanced, and time saving. but only till the timeThis, however, will only be to our advantage, if we keep using the facilities for the purpose of entertainment only and that too inwithin limits, not forgeting forgettingin order to have enough time available for our responsibilities and relationship with our family, friends and near and dear ones.
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