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    Teacher, can you check this paragraph. Thank you.


    You have asked me to call Jenny's mother to arrange a meeting and I have not been able to get hold of her. I left her a message a few days ago and till now I have not received a call from her. I called her twice today, one in the morning and one after 5 p.m., and there was no answer and I decided not to leave another message. Maybe I should write a letter to her. She and family may be away on vacation.

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    please check this paragraph

    Teacher, can you check this paragraph. Thank you.


    You have asked me to call Jenny's mother to arrange a meeting and I have not been able to get hold of her. I left her a message a few days ago and till now I have not received a call from her. I called her twice today, one once in the morning and one once after 5 p.m., and there was no answer and I decided not to leave another message. Maybe I should write a letter to her. She and her family may be away on vacation.


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