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    Question how can i make my paragraph better

    What I find interesting about yearbook staff. Is talking to people taking pictures and interviewing. And I think it would be a good experience for me and it would teach me how to concentrate and make new friends and meet new people and thatís what I find interesting about yearbook staff.

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    Quote Originally Posted by julian1234 View Post
    What I find interesting about yearbook staff. Is talking to people taking pictures and interviewing. And I think it would be a good experience for me and it would teach me how to concentrate and make new friends and meet new people and that’s what I find interesting about yearbook staff.
    Are you really a native English speaker?

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    Are you sure you mean "staff"?

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