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julian1234

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What I find interesting about yearbook staff. Is talking to people taking pictures and interviewing. And I think it would be a good experience for me and it would teach me how to concentrate and make new friends and meet new people and that’s what I find interesting about yearbook staff.
 

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What I find interesting about yearbook staff. Is talking to people taking pictures and interviewing. And I think it would be a good experience for me and it would teach me how to concentrate and make new friends and meet new people and that’s what I find interesting about yearbook staff.

Are you really a native English speaker?
 

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Are you sure you mean "staff"?
 
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