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Monsoon is upon us, and along it comes the dreadful disease like Malaria. The time has come for you to join the Lumet 80 fight against Malaria. Lumet 80 an anti-malaria drug from the staple of Cipla
The time has come for you to gear up and march ahead the competitors, to make Lumet 80 No. 1 in the market and emerge as a real Hero in the battle of Malaria. Let’s together work toward a one goal – to make Lumet 80, an hallmark of Cipla’s quality a big success.
Cipla is one of the leading pharma companies in different categories, but in the category of malaria we are much behind as compared to our competitors. The time has come for us to prove our mettle in the fight against Malaria and this is not possible without your contribution. This time we have to not just meet, but exceed all expectations, and it is very much possible with your determination and dedication to become an ultimate hero by making Lumet 80 a success.
 

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Monsoon is upon us, and along it comes the dreadful disease like Malaria. The time has come for you to join the Lumet 80 fight against Malaria. Lumet 80 an anti-malaria drug from the staple of Cipla
The time has come for you to gear up and march ahead the competitors, to make Lumet 80 No. 1 in the market and emerge as a real Hero in the battle of Malaria. Let’s together work toward a one goal – to make Lumet 80, an hallmark of Cipla’s quality a big success.
Cipla is one of the leading pharma companies in different categories, but in the category of malaria we are much behind as compared to our competitors. The time has come for us to prove our mettle in the fight against Malaria and this is not possible without your contribution. This time we have to not just meet, but exceed all expectations, and it is very much possible with your determination and dedication to become an ultimate hero by making Lumet 80 a success.

The monsoon is upon us, and along with it comes the dreadful disease Malaria. The time has come for you to join the Lumet 80 fight against Malaria. Lumet 80 is an anti-malaria drug from the Cipla stable.
It's time to gear up and march ahead of the competitors, to make Lumet 80 No.1 in the market and emerge as a real Hero in the battle against Malaria. Let’s work together toward.one goal – to make Lumet 80, a hallmark of Cipla’s quality, a big success.
Cipla is one of the leading pharma companies in different categories, but in the category of malaria we have been behind compared to our competitors. The time has come for us to prove our mettle in the fight against Malaria and this is not possible without your contribution. This time we have to not just meet, but exceed all expectations, and it is very much possible with your determination and dedication to become an ultimate hero by making Lumet 80 a success.

Above is my suggestion.
 
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