Results 1 to 2 of 2
  1. #1
    TheShadow is offline Member
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • Student or Learner
      • Native Language:
      • Dutch
      • Home Country:
      • Belgium
      • Current Location:
      • Belgium
    Join Date
    Feb 2011
    Posts
    179
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default please correct to make it sound better

    Hi,

    "I'm writing to extend my flat for two more years as my course extends for two more years"

    Thanks

  2. #2
    emsr2d2's Avatar
    emsr2d2 is offline Moderator
    • Member Info
      • Member Type:
      • English Teacher
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • UK
    Join Date
    Jul 2009
    Posts
    23,610
    Post Thanks / Like

    Default Re: please correct to make it sound better

    Quote Originally Posted by TheShadow View Post
    Hi,

    "I'm writing to extend my flat for two more years as my course extends for two more years"

    Thanks
    Dear XXX

    I would like to request a two-year extension to the lease/rent on my flat as my [school/college/university] course will continue for another two years.

    Thank you/Yours faithfullly/Yours sincerely (as appropriate)

    [Your name]

Similar Threads

  1. please correct to make it sound better
    By TheShadow in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 18-Sep-2011, 21:24
  2. Please correct to make it sound better
    By TheShadow in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: 14-Sep-2011, 14:00
  3. Please correct to make it sound better
    By TheShadow in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 10-Sep-2011, 21:39
  4. Please correct to make it sound better
    By TheShadow in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: 07-Sep-2011, 04:14
  5. please correct to make it sound better
    By TheShadow in forum Ask a Teacher
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 12-Jul-2011, 16:36

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •