learning54
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Hi teachers,
Could you correct this short paragraph? My problem is with this sentence, 'Really early for him'. I would like to use the word 'early' somewhere in the paragraph. I just don't know if I did it right.
Addional information: Robert is a very lazy person that too often arrives late at work. One day he did it at 10:30 and his boss was very angry with him and told him that it was the last time or he will be fired. By the way, He starts working at 9.00.
I wonder which option is better? Is there a better one? The paragraph is for beginner students.
Option:B
After the discussion with Mr.Landon, Robert has got lots of time for breakfast because he is up at 6:50. Now it’s only half past seven in the morning, really early for him, and he is having a large breakfast in the kitchen.
Option:B
After the discussion with Mr. Landon, Robert has got lots of time for breakfast because he is up at 6:50. Now it’s only half past seven in the morning and he is having a large breakfast in the kitchen, really early for him.
Thanks in advance.
Could you correct this short paragraph? My problem is with this sentence, 'Really early for him'. I would like to use the word 'early' somewhere in the paragraph. I just don't know if I did it right.
Addional information: Robert is a very lazy person that too often arrives late at work. One day he did it at 10:30 and his boss was very angry with him and told him that it was the last time or he will be fired. By the way, He starts working at 9.00.
I wonder which option is better? Is there a better one? The paragraph is for beginner students.
Option:B
After the discussion with Mr.Landon, Robert has got lots of time for breakfast because he is up at 6:50. Now it’s only half past seven in the morning, really early for him, and he is having a large breakfast in the kitchen.
Option:B
After the discussion with Mr. Landon, Robert has got lots of time for breakfast because he is up at 6:50. Now it’s only half past seven in the morning and he is having a large breakfast in the kitchen, really early for him.
Thanks in advance.
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