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    TheShadow is offline Member
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    Please make it sound better

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    "You said you were coming now you cancelling it? This is really not right from you " is there a better way to say the sentence in bold?

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    Re: Please make it sound better

    ***** NOT A TEACHER *****


    Maybe something like:

    You said that you were coming, but now you're canceling. That's really not a right thing for you to do! / You're

    really wrong to do that! / It's just not right for you to do that! / What you're doing is really not right! / What

    you're doing is really wrong! / You're really being unfair to do that!

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    Re: Please make it sound better

    NOT TEACHER


    You can say it also as 'You should have planned better/properly' , or even 'This is not what I expected from you'

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