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    Talking divorce affects children

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    A happy family that has both father and mother is the most wonderful dream of every people. Living in that environment, children can a perfect development. However, it is unlucky for children who can not live with father or mother. They are affected very much.
    Nowadays, divorce tends to be more popular because they do not feel happy when they live together and they need to be freedom. If they donít have children, it is no problem. On the other hands, if they have that ones, it is not a simple thing. How children affect divorce family is always a huge question.
    First, children donít have a perfect caringÖ If the children live without father, they will lack of the fatherís education. On contrary, if they lack mother, it means they donít have the motherís caring. Specially, they will have many life problems they need to know in their life but they can not ask their parent whom they are living with.
    Second, children will suffer the psychology problems. Many people think there are no problems if children are supported all necessary conditions. Because of that thought, it is the main reason that makes children worse. They live in available condition and they know that their parent ready to give them whatever they want, so they will have some bad habits such as following the most modern needs, interesting in playing more than learning. ..
    Next, their study will be influenced. When they face with that problem, they tend to more nervous, sad, disappointedÖ They donít have any enthusiasm to learn more, they just want to leave their home. They donít want to meet people who make them hurt.
    Finally, they will have a painful memory about divorce and family. They maybe have a bad look on their parents. Even, they lose their belief in the happy family, the image of divorce family usually follows them. It is more difficult for them to have a happy family in the future.
    Donít think that school can support everything for children and parents donít need to do everything. Try to solve the problems properly in the family to get a perfect life for children. Nothing can not solve, the problem is that we want do that or not.A happy family that has both father and mother is the most wonderful dream of every people. Living in that environment, children can a perfect development. However, it is unlucky for children who can not live with father or mother. They are affected very much.
    Nowadays, divorce tends to be more popular because they do not feel happy when they live together and they need to be freedom. If they donít have children, it is no problem. On the other hands, if they have that ones, it is not a simple thing. How children affect divorce family is always a huge question.
    First, children donít have a perfect caringÖ If the children live without father, they will lack of the fatherís education. On contrary, if they lack mother, it means they donít have the motherís caring. Specially, they will have many life problems they need to know in their life but they can not ask their parent whom they are living with.
    Second, children will suffer the psychology problems. Many people think there are no problems if children are supported all necessary conditions. Because of that thought, it is the main reason that makes children worse. They live in available condition and they know that their parent ready to give them whatever they want, so they will have some bad habits such as following the most modern needs, interesting in playing more than learning. ..
    Next, their study will be influenced. When they face with that problem, they tend to more nervous, sad, disappointedÖ They donít have any enthusiasm to learn more, they just want to leave their home. They donít want to meet people who make them hurt.
    Finally, they will have a painful memory about divorce and family. They maybe have a bad look on their parents. Even, they lose their belief in the happy family, the image of divorce family usually follows them. It is more difficult for them to have a happy family in the future.
    Donít think that school can support everything for children and parents donít need to do everything. Try to solve the problems properly in the family to get a perfect life for children. Nothing can not solve, the problem is that we want do that or not.
    thanks everyone!!!

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    After you have turned in your essay and want help with your teacher's comments we can help you. It would not be fair or helpful to you to support your learning if we correct it before you turn it in.
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