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    #1

    Please correct this.

    We have created exemplary models that provide leadership in the sectors of Education, Disaster Relief and Rehabilitation, Human Rights Advocacy, Promotion of Interfaith and Harmony and Sustainable Community Development. This has been endorsed at all levels of stakeholders involved and reflected in this report.

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    #2

    Re: Please correct this.

    Add a comma after 'Harmony'.

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    #3

    Re: Please correct this.

    thanks

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    #4

    Re: Please correct this.

    "This has been endorsed at all levels of stakeholders involved and reflected in this report", can you please tell me the meaning of this in simple words

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    #5

    Re: Please correct this.

    'This has been agreed to by all interested parties and is shown in this report.'

    I should also have said 'Add "is" before "reflected"'.

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    #6

    Re: Please correct this.

    Fostering strong relationships with the communities supported has earned enduring trust. We aim to build on this strong foundation to spread the advantages "we have brought to the small handful of communities helped thus far". can you please explain me the highlighted line, i will be very thankful to you.

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