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    Default Please check my sentences for grammar

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    Default Re: Please check my sentences for grammar

    They are not sentences as neither has a main verb.

    We cannot check the grammar until you have used them in complete sentences.

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    Default Re: Please check my sentences for grammar

    it is just a one liner for car ads, I understand they are not sentence, sorry for the wrong subject. Kindly let me know if it sounds nice as per grammar

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    Default Re: Please check my sentences for grammar

    The second one doesn't make sense.

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    thank you sir I will rework on it

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