Please check my sentences for grammar

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The power to outshine and outperform others

Accelerating your excitement that travel beyond your sixth sense
 

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They are not sentences as neither has a main verb.

We cannot check the grammar until you have used them in complete sentences.

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it is just a one liner for car ads, I understand they are not sentence, sorry for the wrong subject. Kindly let me know if it sounds nice as per grammar
 

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The second one doesn't make sense.
 

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thank you sir I will rework on it
 
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