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    Red face Can someone plz edit these few words for me :)

    when you share an interest between you and your enemy against a biggest enemy you will say : dear enemy, you have been missed

    I know its sound understandable just plz try to fix it

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    Default Re: Can someone plz edit these few words for me :)

    Welcome to the forum, EKO.

    Please try to use capital letters and standard English forms; see my amendments, below:
    Quote Originally Posted by EK082 View Post
    w When you share an interest between you and your enemy against a biggester enemy you will sayno space: d Dear enemy, you have been missed."

    I know its sounds understandable; just plz please try to fix it.
    The first part is not natural English. This is a little more natural:

    When you and your enemy share an interest against a bigger enemy, you will say, "Dear enemy, you have been misssed."
    Please do not edit your question after it has received a response. Such editing can make the response hard for others to understand.


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    Default Re: Can someone plz edit these few words for me :)

    I know the expression "The enemy of my enemy is my friend." I don't agree with it much, though!
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Default Re: Can someone plz edit these few words for me :)

    Thank you very much 5jj,
    Bard - Yes YOU are right however i do agree with it

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