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    Default Please correct it to make it sound better

    Hi,

    Is this sentence correct : their adress doesn 't say on their website

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    Default Re: Please correct it to make it sound better

    Quote Originally Posted by TheShadow View Post
    Hi,

    Is this sentence correct : "Their address doesn't say on their website"?

    Thanks.
    No. I think perhaps you mean "Their address is not shown on their website".

    Please remember to finish every sentence with the relevant punctuation mark (full stop, question mark, exclamation mark).
    We don't put a space on either side of an apostrophe.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Default Re: Please correct it to make it sound better

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    No. I think perhaps you mean "Their address is not shown on their website".

    Please remember to finish every sentence with the relevant punctuation mark (full stop, question mark, exclamation mark).
    We don't put a space on either side of an apostrophe.
    Oh! Look at the avatar, at first I thought we've got a new member. That's good for a change.
    Being a non-native teacher, I'm so thrilled being in such a superb forum.

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