How can I improve the below sentences?
Besides my passion for teaching, one of my strengths that I have to offer is my enthusiasm when it comes to the incorporation of technology into my lessons.
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Another option: Included in my passion for teaching, is the enthusiasm I have for the application of technology in my lessons.
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